Persuasive argument rests on concrete statistics and reliable citations. This lesson covers the formal expressions for presenting numerical data and attributing it to its source.
Presenting Statistics
ν΅κ³μ² μλ£μ λ°λ₯΄λ©΄, μ²λ
μ€μ
λ₯ μ μ§λν΄ λλΉ 3νΌμΌνΈ μ¦κ°νμ΅λλ€.
π
0.8Γ
0.6Γ
tonggyecheong jaryoe ttareumyeon, cheongnyeon sireomnyureun jinanhae daebi sam peosenteu jeunggahaetseumnida.
According to data from the National Statistical Office, the youth unemployment rate rose by 3 percent compared with last year.
μ€λ¬Έ μ‘°μ¬ κ²°κ³Ό, μλ΅μμ μ λ° μ΄μμ΄ μ°¬μ±νλ κ²μΌλ‘ λνλ¬μ΅λλ€.
π
0.8Γ
0.6Γ
seolmun josa gyeolgwa, eungdapjaui jeolban isangi chanseonghaneun geoseuro natananseumnida.
The survey found that more than half of respondents were in favor.
μ΄ μμΉλ μ 체 μμ°μ μ½ 4λΆμ 1μ μ°¨μ§ν©λλ€.
π
0.8Γ
0.6Γ
i suchineun jeonche yesanui yak sa bunui ireul chajihamnida.
This figure accounts for about a quarter of the total budget.
Citing Sources Phrases like "~μ λ°λ₯΄λ©΄" (according to...), "~κ° λ°νν λ³΄κ³ μμ μνλ©΄" (per the report published by...), and "~μ μ°κ΅¬ κ²°κ³Όλ₯Ό μΈμ©νμλ©΄" (to cite the findings of...) are central to underscoring the credibility of a source.
ν μ°κ΅¬ κΈ°κ΄μ΄ λ°νν λ³΄κ³ μμ μνλ©΄, μ¬μμλμ§ λΉμ€μ΄ λ λ°°λ‘ λμμ΅λλ€.
π
0.8Γ
0.6Γ
han yeongu giganΡ balphyohan bogoseoe uihamyeon, jaesaengeneoji bijungi du baero neureotseumnida.
According to a report published by a research institute, the share of renewable energy has doubled.
μ λ¬Έκ°λ€μ 견ν΄λ₯Ό μΈμ©νμλ©΄, μ΄ μΆμΈλ ν₯ν 10λ
κ° μ§μλ μ λ§μ
λλ€.
π
0.8Γ
0.6Γ
jeonmungadeurui gyeonhaereul inyonghajamyeon, i chuseneun hyanghu sip nyeongan jisokdoel jeonmangimnida.
To cite the views of experts, this trend is projected to continue for the next ten years.
Acknowledging a Source's Limits For a fair argument, also admit the limits of your data. Adding a caveat like "λ€λ§ νλ³Έμ΄ μ νμ μ΄λΌλ μ μ κ³ λ €ν΄μΌ ν©λλ€" (that said, the sample is limited and should be taken into account) actually strengthens your credibility.
λ€λ§ μ΄ μ‘°μ¬λ νλ³Έμ΄ μ νμ μ΄λΌλ μ μ ν¨κ» λ°νλλ€.
π
0.8Γ
0.6Γ
daman i josaneun pyobon-i jehanjeogiraneun jeomeul hamkke balkimnida.
That said, I should note that this survey had a limited sample.
Expression Function
~μ λ°λ₯΄λ©΄ Citing a source ~λ‘ λνλ¬μ΅λλ€ Survey result ~λ°° μ¦κ°/κ°μνμ΅λλ€ Rate of change ~μ μ°¨μ§ν©λλ€ Stating a proportion ~λ‘ λνλ¬μ΅λλ€ Reporting a finding λ€λ§ ~λΌλ νκ³κ° μμ΅λλ€ Noting limitations
π‘ Tip: Whenever you quote a figure, name its source, or you won't earn trust. A statistic with no source actually weakens the persuasiveness of your claim. A comparison is also more effective than a bare figure. "μ λ
λλΉ λ λ°° μ¦κ°ν 5λ§ λͺ
" (50,000, double last year's) leaves a stronger impression on an audience than "5λ§ λͺ
" (50,000) alone.