Citing Statistics and Sources

Persuasive argument rests on concrete statistics and reliable citations. This lesson covers the formal expressions for presenting numerical data and attributing it to its source.

Presenting Statistics

톡계청 μžλ£Œμ— λ”°λ₯΄λ©΄, μ²­λ…„ μ‹€μ—…λ₯ μ€ μ§€λ‚œν•΄ λŒ€λΉ„ 3νΌμ„ΌνŠΈ μ¦κ°€ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
tonggyecheong jaryoe ttareumyeon, cheongnyeon sireomnyureun jinanhae daebi sam peosenteu jeunggahaetseumnida.
According to data from the National Statistical Office, the youth unemployment rate rose by 3 percent compared with last year.
μ„€λ¬Έ 쑰사 κ²°κ³Ό, μ‘λ‹΅μžμ˜ 절반 이상이 μ°¬μ„±ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚¬μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
seolmun josa gyeolgwa, eungdapjaui jeolban isangi chanseonghaneun geoseuro natananseumnida.
The survey found that more than half of respondents were in favor.
이 μˆ˜μΉ˜λŠ” 전체 μ˜ˆμ‚°μ˜ μ•½ 4λΆ„μ˜ 1을 μ°¨μ§€ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.
i suchineun jeonche yesanui yak sa bunui ireul chajihamnida.
This figure accounts for about a quarter of the total budget.

Citing Sources

Phrases like "~에 λ”°λ₯΄λ©΄" (according to...), "~κ°€ λ°œν‘œν•œ λ³΄κ³ μ„œμ— μ˜ν•˜λ©΄" (per the report published by...), and "~의 연ꡬ κ²°κ³Όλ₯Ό μΈμš©ν•˜μžλ©΄" (to cite the findings of...) are central to underscoring the credibility of a source.

ν•œ 연ꡬ 기관이 λ°œν‘œν•œ λ³΄κ³ μ„œμ— μ˜ν•˜λ©΄, μž¬μƒμ—λ„ˆμ§€ 비쀑이 두 배둜 λŠ˜μ—ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.
han yeongu giganΡ– balphyohan bogoseoe uihamyeon, jaesaengeneoji bijungi du baero neureotseumnida.
According to a report published by a research institute, the share of renewable energy has doubled.
μ „λ¬Έκ°€λ“€μ˜ 견해λ₯Ό μΈμš©ν•˜μžλ©΄, 이 μΆ”μ„ΈλŠ” ν–₯ν›„ 10λ…„κ°„ 지속될 μ „λ§μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.
jeonmungadeurui gyeonhaereul inyonghajamyeon, i chuseneun hyanghu sip nyeongan jisokdoel jeonmangimnida.
To cite the views of experts, this trend is projected to continue for the next ten years.

Acknowledging a Source's Limits

For a fair argument, also admit the limits of your data. Adding a caveat like "λ‹€λ§Œ ν‘œλ³Έμ΄ μ œν•œμ μ΄λΌλŠ” 점은 κ³ λ €ν•΄μ•Ό ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€" (that said, the sample is limited and should be taken into account) actually strengthens your credibility.

λ‹€λ§Œ 이 μ‘°μ‚¬λŠ” ν‘œλ³Έμ΄ μ œν•œμ μ΄λΌλŠ” 점을 ν•¨κ»˜ λ°νž™λ‹ˆλ‹€.
daman i josaneun pyobon-i jehanjeogiraneun jeomeul hamkke balkimnida.
That said, I should note that this survey had a limited sample.
ExpressionFunction
~에 λ”°λ₯΄λ©΄Citing a source
~둜 λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚¬μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€Survey result
~λ°° 증가/κ°μ†Œν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€Rate of change
~을 μ°¨μ§€ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€Stating a proportion
~둜 λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚¬μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€Reporting a finding
λ‹€λ§Œ ~λΌλŠ” ν•œκ³„κ°€ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€Noting limitations
πŸ’‘ Tip: Whenever you quote a figure, name its source, or you won't earn trust. A statistic with no source actually weakens the persuasiveness of your claim.

A comparison is also more effective than a bare figure. "μ „λ…„ λŒ€λΉ„ 두 λ°° μ¦κ°€ν•œ 5만 λͺ…" (50,000, double last year's) leaves a stronger impression on an audience than "5만 λͺ…" (50,000) alone.

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