Objective Style in Expository Writing

Expository writing and reports must convey facts accurately while excluding the writer's emotions. An objective style avoids subjective expressions and centers on verifiable information.

Avoiding subjectivity

Refrain from subjective, colloquial expressions such as 'nae saenggageneun' (in my opinion), 'jeongmal' (really), and 'neomu' (too). Instead, secure objectivity through data and sources.

쑰사 κ²°κ³Ό μ‘λ‹΅μžμ˜ 72%κ°€ μ œλ„ κ°œμ„ μ— μ°¬μ„±ν•˜μ˜€λ‹€.
josa gyeolgwa eungdapjaui 72%ga jedo gaeseone chanseonghayeotda.
According to the survey, 72% of respondents favored institutional reform.
μˆ˜μΉ˜λŠ” μ „λ…„ λŒ€λΉ„ 8.4%p μƒμŠΉν•œ κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ μ§‘κ³„λ˜μ—ˆλ‹€.
suchineun jeonnyeon daebi 8.4%p sangseunghan geoseuro jipgyedoeeotda.
The figure was tallied as an 8.4 percentage-point rise year-on-year.

Passive and indirect forms

Use passive forms to emphasize the fact itself rather than the actor. Representative examples are '-(eu)ro natanatda' (was found to be) and '-(eu)ro bunseokdoenda' (is analyzed as).

μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ²°κ³ΌλŠ” μ„ ν–‰ 연ꡬ와 μΌμΉ˜ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ νŒλ‹¨λœλ‹€.
ireohan gyeolgwaneun seonhaeng yeonguwa ilchihaneun geoseuro pandandoenda.
This result is judged to be consistent with prior research.
두 λ³€μˆ˜ κ°„μ—λŠ” μœ μ˜λ―Έν•œ 상관관계가 μžˆλŠ” κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚¬λ‹€.
du byeonsu ganeneun yuuimihan sanggwangwangyega inneun geoseuro natanatda.
A significant correlation was found between the two variables.

Hedging and reservation

To avoid categorical assertions and acknowledge the limits of a finding, use '-(eu)l su itda' (may), '-(eu)l geoseuro boinda' (appears to), and '-(eu)l ganeungseongi itda' (there is a possibility that). These prevent overgeneralization and raise academic credibility.

이 μ°¨μ΄λŠ” ν‘œλ³Έ 크기에 기인할 κ°€λŠ₯성이 μžˆλ‹€.
i chaineun pyobon keugie giinhal ganeungseongi itda.
This difference may be attributable to the sample size.

Consistent terminology

Mark the same concept with the same term to reduce confusion, and add a definition for each technical term at its first appearance.

λ³Έ λ³΄κ³ μ„œμ—μ„œ '이용자'λž€ μ„œλΉ„μŠ€μ— κ°€μž…ν•œ 자λ₯Ό μ˜λ―Έν•œλ‹€.
bon bogoseoeseo 'iyongja'ran seobiseue gaipan jareul uimihanda.
In this report, 'user' refers to a person who has subscribed to the service.
Colloquial / subjectiveObjective styleNote
μ§„μ§œ 많이 λŠ˜μ—ˆλ‹€32% μ¦κ°€ν•˜μ˜€λ‹€quantify
λ‚΄ 생각엔 μ’‹λ‹€νš¨κ³Όμ μΈ κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ ν‰κ°€λœλ‹€evidence-based
μš°λ¦¬κ°€ μ‘°μ‚¬ν–ˆλ‹€μ‘°μ‚¬κ°€ μˆ˜ν–‰λ˜μ—ˆλ‹€passive
ν™•μ‹€νžˆ κ·Έλ ‡λ‹€κ·ΈλŸ΄ κ°€λŠ₯성이 μžˆλ‹€hedging
πŸ’‘ Tip: Keep tense consistent in a report. By convention, completed surveys and experiments take the past tense ('-hayeotda'), while general facts and conclusions take the present tense ('-handa').
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